Episode #23: The Design Stage Of Presenting

Why do so many business presentations end up forgettable?

Most professionals jump straight into slides without designing the talk first. The result is predictable: the structure feels loose, the points blur together, and the message disappears as soon as the speaker leaves the room. In Japan, this often shows up as confusion between giving a speech well and merely giving a speech at all. But a presentation isn’t a “task to finish.” It’s a chance to create value for your audience and strengthen your personal and corporate brand.

Mini-summary: Starting with slides instead of design produces talks that lack clarity and impact. A presentation is a brand-building tool, not a box-ticking exercise.

Your purpose is always to move the audience toward a clear outcome: to inform, persuade, entertain, or motivate action. Audiences judge companies by the people they meet. A strong speaker lifts the perceived capability of the entire organization; a weak speaker lowers it. That reputational leverage is why presentation design matters.

Mini-summary: Your talk shapes how others judge you and your company. Great speakers increase trust and perceived competence.

Why should you design the conclusion first?

The conclusion forces discipline. It’s the distilled “one central takeaway” you want your audience to remember after everything else fades. Starting here helps you avoid wandering into side topics. Even if the final delivery evolves, beginning with the end keeps your presentation aligned.

Mini-summary: Designing the conclusion first clarifies your core message. Everything else should support that takeaway.

Too many points overwhelm the audience; too few can feel shallow or unconvincing. Group related ideas under one umbrella and support them with evidence—data, expert opinion, authority references, and real examples.

A simple guideline:

• Three key points works best for most talks.

• Up to five may be needed for complex topics or longer speaking times.

Mini-summary: Limit yourself to a small set of strong points, supported by evidence. Clarity beats volume.

What structures help audiences follow your argument?

Choose a logical flow that makes agreement easy:

• Problem → Solution → Result

• Result → Problem → Solution

• Or other cause-and-effect sequences.

Regardless of format, each point should naturally lead to the next without forcing the audience to do mental gymnastics.

Mini-summary: Use a clear, logical structure so the audience can follow effortlessly. Flow creates persuasion.

You need:

1. A final close to unify your message at the end.

2. A second close after Q&A to regain control of the takeaway.

Q&A can pull discussion off-track. If you end on someone else’s tangent, you lose your message. The second close resets attention on your key point.

Mini-summary: Two closes protect your message. The second close restores focus after unpredictable questions.

How do you design an opening that captures attention?

The opening is high-risk and high-reward because first impressions form instantly. Weak jokes, rambling, or boring starts lose the room immediately. Design your opening with precision and deliver it exactly as planned.

High-impact opening tools:

• Rhetorical questions delivered with slight uncertainty so the audience leans in.

• Expert quotes to boost authority.

• Statistics to signal evidence-based thinking.

• A provocative statement that creates curiosity.

• Flagging your conclusion early, then proving it—use carefully to avoid predictability.

Mini-summary: Design your opening for attention and authority. A strong start earns the right to be heard.

How can you connect with the audience before you speak?

Arrive early and talk with participants. Ask about the topic and listen. Then reference one or two comments in your opening. It erases the invisible barrier between speaker and audience and makes people feel seen.

Mini-summary: Pre-talk mingling builds instant rapport. Referencing audience input increases engagement.

Only after the talk is designed. When you know your message and flow, slides become support—not a script. This reduces on-screen text and lets you use:

• images

• diagrams

• short phrases

• even single words to cue your narrative

The less you read, the more you connect.

Mini-summary: Slides should support a designed talk, not create it. Visual simplicity keeps attention on you.

Why do minimalist slides make you more memorable?

Audiences won’t remember most details, but they will remember their impression of you. If everyone expects text-heavy slides and you present clearly with visuals, you stand out.

In Japan, slides often resemble Baroque art—dense, ornate, and overloaded. Japan values detail and written proof, but that doesn’t mean everything must be on the screen. This is an area where many Japanese organizations (日本企業 — Japanese companies) and multinational firms (外資系企業 — multinational companies in Japan) can gain a major communication edge.

Mini-summary: Minimalist slides increase attention and recall. Clear visuals separate you from the crowd, especially in Japan.

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• Design your conclusion first so every part of your talk supports one clear takeaway.

• Limit your points (usually three) and structure them logically with evidence.

• Create two closes to protect your message, especially after Q&A.

• Design your opening to seize attention; use slides only after the talk is built.

Founded in the U.S. in 1912, Dale Carnegie Training has supported individuals and companies worldwide for over a century in leadership, sales, presentation, executive coaching, and DEI. Our Tokyo office, established in 1963, has been empowering both Japanese and multinational corporate clients ever since.